There were meant to be three A3 size final posters in the review. On one sheet i had to provide an analysis of my design, on another my concept and process and my last poster a synthesis.
Minima i thought was a fun project to do in 3 weeks. i brought in my development each friday to show Richard what i had done for the week and was making better progress. however, in the final week, i think that my presentation for the project had let me down a lot and i think anyone can agree on this. the drawings werent clear enough and my sections showed nothing. i look back at them and can think of at least 10 different things that i could have done differently.
My design was pretty much based on the view. as the site was sitting right on the waterfront, i wanted to take advantage of this. i also, did not want my building to block this view from the people inside the univeristy looking outside, so i suspended my building and had it raised up. the design looked like a cockpit in the airplane, where you look out and can look fromt left to right, just looking at the view. i had split the wet area (bathroom), sleeping area and kitchen with internal short walls, the outer walls were made of structural plywood painted joined with a mild steel cleat then bolted. it was designed big enough only for one person to sit, walk comfortably and i did this using my measurements.
In my final review i had Richard Tucker and Kim Roberts as my reviewers. i was first up and it went really quickly.
Things that were said in my Review:
Presentation wasn't very strong and didn't look like a final product. they seemed to look like sketches than anything. the posters looked like i didn't put enough work into it.
Drawings werent clean or clear enough, and in my section - they were missing line thicknesses and did not show anything.
my posters did not clearly show how the building is structured and if the walls when constructed could be suspended up in the air.
POSTER 3: ANAYLSIS/ CONCEPT AND PROCESS

POSTER 2: CONCEPT AND PROCESS, ELEVATIONS AND SITE PLAN.

POSTER 3: SYNTHESIS 1:20